Hi Johanna, I really like your post about social media. I really liked how you put statistics and pictures on there as well. Overall you did a very good job and keep up the good work!
Hello, Johanna! The evidence you've provided with your paragraph was very interesting! Your paragraph is very good, too. It was cool to see that you've chosen something that wasn't a lawyer paragraph. However, one thing I may add next time would be to add the sources you got your evidence from. Really cool work!
Hi Johanna, I really like your post about social media. I really liked how you put statistics and pictures on there as well. Overall you did a very good job and keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHello, Johanna!
ReplyDeleteThe evidence you've provided with your paragraph was very interesting! Your paragraph is very good, too. It was cool to see that you've chosen something that wasn't a lawyer paragraph. However, one thing I may add next time would be to add the sources you got your evidence from.
Really cool work!